At Fiction with Friction:

http://www.fictionwithfriction.com/2012/11/24/eat-desert-first-invitation-by-james-buchanan/ Part of the Eat Desert First fiction fest…

Don’t usually do Meme’s here…however this one gives you a taste of the WIP. Now, I’m not cheating, but I am estimating. I’m writing in Scrivner so I estimated 500 words per page to get to page 7 and then here you go:

Post your work in progress, page 77 or page 7, lines 7-14, no cheating.

Opened my front door and smelled smoke. After about two breaths of panic, I realized I didn’t hear the smoke detector screeching. When I stepped on inside, I figured where the smell came from. This big ol’ pack sat right next to the door and Kabe’s boots rested maybe two steps beyond it.

It all reeked of cinders.

Kabe himself, well, he sprawled dead-to-the-world on the couch. Hadn’t even changed out of his filthy t-shirt and cargo pants. Likely he just stumbled in, tripped out of his boots and passed out. Hard work he was doing these days on a fire crew.

Thought of a hundred scenarios of how I’d show him how much I’d missed him around the moment he stepped through the door.

And not a one of them was gonna happen with him out cold.

Today is my day over at Fiction with Friction. Officer Alevernga and Tim are back in a little story called Fireworks

You can read them at http://www.fictionwithfriction.com/2010/07/10/fight-for-your-rights-fireworks/ 

So not worksafe folks.

Well, not literally.  This is the wonder of the net2.0.

I’m working on book two of the Deputy Joe Books (working title is Requiem in Leather) and I want the little details right.

Google Maps is my friend.  Map the route and then drop down into street view and follow it.  I can “feel” how the road is hemmed in by the bay one side and sandstone cliffs on the other.  How the trees lean over the road an cloak it in shadows.  How long and twisty that extended U around Bolinas bay is.  You can see the town as though you’re walking through it.  People upload their own photos of particularly interesting spots.  It’s a great way to keep things  realistic.  You can feel how close or open streets are, see what houses look like, all of that.

Back to writing.

Personal DemonsPersonal Demons

by James Buchanan

coming September 2009

in eBook and Print from MLR Press

Hunting a notorious hit man, FBI Agent Chase Nozick and LAPD Det. Enrique Rios Ochoa delve into the inner worlds of Santeria, Voodoo and Palo Mayumbe. A missing informant, her murdered brother and a ghost from Chase’s past send them on a hunt through mystics and psychic surgeons to find their witness before it’s too late. Can he rely on leads from a child possessed by Orishas? Do cards hold stronger clues than blood? Chase must conquer his own personal demons to bring the killer of his partner to justice and find the strength to take a chance on Enrique.

 

Hours later, Chase stared at the drink in his hand. Maybe this was just a bad idea. He’d been in the City of Angels for four hours, tops, and he hadn’t even talked to anyone yet. Well, during dinner, he’d chatted it up with a waiter who looked way too young to be serving drinks. The kid recommended the bar Chase leaned on now. Relaxed, trendy — but not —  and way crowded; Silverlake’s low-key answer to West Hollywood’s forced urban hip.

Nude women stared vacantly off red and gold walls. Chase figured he should have specified somewhere more overtly gay and less just gay-friendly when asking for recommends. People, of all orientations and ages, lounged on Moroccan-styled couches along the wall. Maybe he would have had better odds on a weekend, Chase mused into the amber liquid swirling in his glass.

“Wow.” A voice at his shoulder jerked Chase’s attention from his self-pity.

He looked up into a bright smile and warm skin. “What?” Damn, the guy was good looking. Not in that stunning movie star kinda way, but with a pleasant face, easy body language and dark eyes. A choker of red and white beads flashed at the open collar of his white shirt. Both colors set off the man’s caramel skin.

Another smile flashed as the guy tapped Chase’s tumbler. “You managed to get a drink.” He laughed and the sound traveled straight down Chase’s spine to his hips. “Takes an act of congress to get service here.”

“Oh,” Chase’s face felt strange. Then he realized it was from an ear-splitting grin. Shit, if that didn’t come off as desperate, Chase would eat his badge. He coughed and raised his glass to his lips in a badly concealed effort to mask the smile. “I laid the money down before I ordered.”

The guy slid onto the stool next to Chase. “Explains it then.” He leaned in and drummed his fingers on the bar. “My name’s Enrique, I don’t think I’ve seen you here before.”

Enrique’s hip pressed against Chase’s thigh. When Enrique shifted, a hard bulge rubbed Chase through his jeans. Okay, Chase mused, so maybe the waiter had been on the money about the place. “I would be surprised if you had,” Chase nudged back a little, letting Enrique know he felt it, “Just in town for business.”

“What kind of business?” The question came loaded. Chase wasn’t sure with exactly what. A strange wariness seemed to lurk under the words. For a moment, Chase toyed with a few implausible explanations and then figured he just didn’t care. Because the hand that dropped down onto his thigh wasn’t wary in the least. Easy, light, Enrique traced the inseam of Chase’s jeans with his fingers.

Refusing to elaborate, Chase muttered, “Just business,” as he knocked back his drink. Chase shrugged and spread his legs a little wider.

“Really,” Enrique moved in closer, “I thought it might be scoping twenty-somethings out looking for their sugar daddies.” The faded edge of cologne threaded under the scent of guy in a hot, crowded bar.

Chase snorted. A sense of humor, he liked that. Not that it was a requirement, but it made it nice, friendly. “The problem with twenty-somethings is they’re twenty-something.” He slid his arm around Enrique to cup a nicely toned ass through expensive slacks. 

Damn, if Enrique moved any closer, he’d end up on Chase’s lap. “How ‘bout a thirty-something then?”

“You’re, ah, pretty direct there.” Chase teased. Actually, for a bar pickup, Enrique was beating about the bush a lot. Half the time a nod, a smile and a jerk of the chin arranged everything.

Enrique leaned in and laughed in his ear. “No, pretty direct is, do you wanna fuck?”

He squeezed Enrique’s butt. “Is that an offer?” Felt good.

No laughter this time. Enrique hissed, “Want it to be?”

“Yeah.” Chase stood.

“Then it’s an offer.”

24ace615c9abcb9138db366cf78294a3-grandeYeah, really, but not that way.
I’ve been toying with writing a prison story.  It’s been bubbling in the back of my brain, but I’ve not been certain it’s something I can or should write.  I know the characters, they’ve got names. Their personalities are forming in my head and they’re starting to talk a little.  I have a half-ass plot (and all my plots start out pretty half-ass, I’m a seat of my pants type writer) with shot-callers and go-to guys and someone getting shanked in the yard.  It will be a small mystery and a very confining envirnoment.
 
However, we’re talking a pretty “out there” place for most of us.  I’ve seen the inside of holding many times (no, get your mind out of the gutter, I.used to work for the prosecution), but I’ve never been to a PRISON.   I don’t know what it feels like, smells like, sounds like.  There’s only so much Nat Geo’s documentaries can help.  I’ve been watching programs, reading letters from prison and visiting bullitin boards and the threads about how to survive in prision.  Still, it’s a heavy subject.  So, I’d shoved this to the back burner.
 
I just got notice that I have to go about 3hrs north at the end of next month to take a deposition of a witness on one of my cases.  While I’m not a big believer in fate…sometimes it’s more than coincidence.  Because this witness, is in prison.  I have to start the whole submitting fingerprint process and ID verification (which will take a bit since I’ve got old cards in the system — my first job in CA was at a school — and those pop and then have to be verified). 
Looks like the story wants to be written. 
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